Tuesday, 27 September 2011

Cheating rife answers

Dear loyal readers,

I was having a squint at your answers this morning and they seemed pretty good. I will go over the sample answers in Monday's session and we can share and exchange ideas. If you didn't manage to finish today you may wish to do so by Monday, but it isn't compulsory (but could be helpful)!

What we are essentially doing is this:

  • Summarising the main points using your own words
  • Addressing the type of article (quality newspaper, magazine etc) and addressing how you know this
  • Who the article is aimed at (again, justifying your answer)
  • What the purpose of the article is (there are lots of possibilities and permutations, again, backed up with evidence from the text)
  • Writer's opinion (there are often a myriad of possibilities again, and guess what, to be evidenced from the passage)
  • Evaluating the article. This is strengths and weaknesses
The helpnotes are there to help you, you are permitted to use dictionaries of any sort, you can consult any other notes etc.

You can type or handwrite your responses too, so don't panic, we will look at the possible answers on Monday. I'm not worried at this stage, so you shouldn't be either!

You will have a go at the answers next Tuesday for our first proper assessment (on the widely discussed topic of digital books) and I will mark them for the following Monday with (helpful) feedback. We will be doing this over three sessions which will neatly take us up to the October break. Some of you may get the assessment completed in two sessions.

I'll see you all next Monday and keep up the good work everybody.

Cheers, Mark

Has the iPod made us anti-social?

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/magazine-15066957

Thoughts anybody?

Monday, 26 September 2011

Mobile phone exam cheats 'on the rise' - BBC News article

Figures released to the BBC by the Scottish Qualifications Authority (SQA) have indicated that cheating on exams has escalated among candidates.

The number of guilty cases climbed by 22%, to 314, from 2008 to 2009.

The number of cases of cheating using a mobile phone, some of which have internet access, has more than doubled.

The SQA said the penalties for cheating ranged from zero marks for individual exam papers to disqualification from all examinations.

Other forms of malpractice or cheating on exams included pupils caught colluding and taking in notes.

Last year about 160,000 candidates took 736,920 exams which resulted in 506 cases of cheating being investigated, with penalties being applied to 314 candidates.

"If you look at the percentage rises, yes it sounds a lot, but the numbers that are cheating are very low and I think we need to understand how we can prepare pupils better for examinations" - Dr Janet Brown
Scottish Qualifications Authority.

This equated to 0.04% of the total, slightly above the level of 0.03% in England.

In 2008, there were 750,559 exams taken with 673 cheating cases investigated.

A total of 257 pupils were found to have broken the rules.

Mobile phones

And the number of cases of cheating using a mobile phone rose from 49 in 2008 to 113 in 2009.

Chief Executive of the Scottish Qualifications Authority, Dr Janet Brown said: "We need to be aware and it is very important that we do address this issue but lets keep it in perspective."

She added: "If you look at the percentage rises, yes it sounds a lot, but the numbers that are cheating are very low and I think we need to understand how we can prepare pupils better for examinations.

"How they can feel confident that they are able to achieve, and I think that it is one of those things that Scottish education does very well."

The exam board said that all candidates are warned of the consequences of cheating in an information booklet they receive prior to taking their examinations.

Cheating is rife slides

Say no to plagiarism and copy and pasting!

Below is a link to the newspaper article that Andrew referred to in this morning's class. It really is an eye opener.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-europe-12608083

I will also post the slides that I used this morning to stimulate our discussion and I should add that the links at the end of my PowerPoint DO work, so I'm not sure why they wouldn't fire up at the end of the class today!

I enjoyed the general discussion that we had on the issue of plagiarism this morning and if you wish to comment on that or the article itself, please do.

http://www.sqa.org.uk/sqa/36434.html - this is a link to some details on plagiarism from the SQA that may be worth a look at sometime too should you have the inclination!

Tomorrow (Tuesday) we will look at answering the questions in class (I will provide some helpnotes) and next Monday (3rd) I will go over the sample answers for the 'cheating is rife' passage for you to cross reference your responses against.

See you all tomorrow at 9,

Mark

Tuesday, 20 September 2011

Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy tops UK box office

Colin Firth in Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy 

Dear all, since we made passing reference to the TTSS film this morning, read on!

The new film adaptation of Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy has topped the UK and Ireland box office.
The movie, which premiered at the Venice Film Festival earlier this month, took a total of £2.8m in ticket sales during its opening weekend.
The Inbetweeners, which held the top spot for four weeks, fell one place.
The Change-Up debuted at five, I Don't How She Does It opened in seventh place and new release 30 Minutes Or Less was at number 10.
Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy, based on the espionage novel by John le Carre, stars Gary Oldman and Colin Firth.
It was originally adapted into a BBC drama in 1979 featuring Alec Guinness and Ian Richardson.

 

Top five films

1. Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy - £2.8m
2. The Inbetweeners - £1.2m
3. Friends With Benefits - £936,025
4. Jane Eyre - £734,071
5. The Change-Up - £727,497
Source: Screen International

The Inbetweeners, based on the popular E4 series, has taken a total of £41.8m since it was released five weeks ago.
At number three this week was romantic comedy Friends With Benefits, followed by Jane Eyre in fourth.
The Smurfs film was down two places, at number six, while Rise Of The Planet Of The Apes was in eighth.
One Day, starring Anne Hathaway, fell three places to number nine.

Given the range of films in the list, there is always something for everyone when it comes to going to the flicks!

Off to a Flyer...


Greetings.

I really enjoyed the class this morning and all the groups (and those working individually) came up with some interesting comments about how the film could be analysed and interpreted. Like all things, we often have different opinions and that always makes learning, teaching and discussion all the richer! We looked at the text (the text being the film in this case) and had a good shot at breaking it down. For me, working in small groups and feeding back enhances our analytical and communication skills and I have been impressed with the level of industry shown in the classes we've had so far. Keep it up everybody and I'll see you on Monday for our session looking at the complex and mightily important subject of plagiarism.

As always, any comments from my classes are welcomed and thank you to those who have been logging in regularly!

All the best, Mark

Tuesday, 13 September 2011

Article on the issue of 'feedback' that I wrote last year

What is the shortest word in the English language that contains the letters abcdef? Answer: Feedback. But don't forget that feedback is arguably one of the most important elements of effective communication. 

Below is the article that I wrote for our internal academic paper 'Illuminating Practice' in November 2010. It will be interesting to see if your feedback mirrors the learners from last year in any way. The type and content of your feedback should be your own though of course.

Summary of good practice

Teaching Communication and English means that student groups are varied. Learners can be assessed on some of the following: reading, writing, talking, listening, group working, summarising, analysing, self and peer evaluation, creativity, critical thinking and critical evaluation of literary texts. Different constituencies demand different approaches to teaching and learning, but one thing remains constant and that is the need for clear and meaningful feedback. It is apparent that there is considerable variety in the ways in which outcomes (tasks) and implications of student performance in assessments are communicated to our students.
                                       
After formative or summative assessment students may receive a written report on their performance from their lecturer, either as a standard proforma or as free text. Students may also participate in an oral feedback session with their lecturer, or be invited to make an appointment to discuss their performance if they wish. There is no doubt that feedback is vital to the learning process and the Communication and English teaching team value the importance of the student taking an active part in their learning. In a team meeting last year, I asked each lecturer to highlight how they deliver feedback to learners and prepared a short report for the HMIe reviewers. It demonstrated quite clearly the variety of methods we use and the positive effect this has had on the students. In this article, I aim to give a breakdown of how I approach the issue of feedback, illustrating my thoughts with qualitative data from a variety of sources. 

Benefits of outcomes

Constructive feedback should not be taken as a criticism and it is important that learners understand the importance of feedback given to them by their lecturers. It is important that lecturers should be culturally sensitive to the feelings of their students and should give them honest, timely, objective and specific feedback in a skillful and tactful manner. Constructive feedback should aim at bringing self-improvement and development in our learners. It is equally important that students are given the opportunity to give lecturers feedback on their progress too!

I deliver feedback in a number of ways, depending on the type of assessment and the onus is on the student to be an autonomous learner. I use the ‘praise sandwich’ approach, which starts with a positive comment, the filling may encourage an agenda for future improvement and finally another positive comment or two to close.

This helps to reinforce what was good about their submission or delivery. When assessing oral presentations, I ask the student how they feel they have performed, using a checklist which acts as a prompt for them to self reflect. I ask for some supportive peer commentary before I deliver positive oral feedback, summarised from a written checklist used to mark the presentation. A reflective template is used for reading assessments, with responses in the main typed out with (hopefully) helpful bespoke comments to encourage the learning of the student .
Report writing, film reviews, essays and minutes may have extended feedback annotated on the student submission with commentary summarised on a checklist. Often the student is asked to sign a self-evaluation form saying that they accept the decision made and any comment they feel would help their learning in the future. It could be argued that Open Learning feedback (via a letter) is slightly more impersonal than other feedback mechanisms, as the lecturer may never meet the student. It is important to pitch this feedback at a level appropriate for the learner, using positive comments and encouraging them to keep working through the workbooks until they are ready for summative assessment.

In a classroom setting after an assessment has been successfully completed by all of the class, I often peer reflect on the good and not so good areas of learning from that outcome in the next lesson, to help refresh the parts that other students couldn’t reach…

This is an open session and I am always open to suggestions myself on how I could improve the assessment, organisation of materials, feedback mechanisms etc.

End of Unit questionnaires are used to ascertain what the student has learned and this reflective commentary is sometimes done verbally as well. I keep a log of comments from students (not just my own, but from all team members) after each semester and save them as a report on our shared drive. Feedback is wide and varied and gives the teaching team a sense of what we are doing well as a team and where improvements can be made, individually and collectively.

Noted below are the main issues gleaned from a large sample of students from the 2008-10 teaching sessions. I have omitted specific comments from students, carefully collated by me at the end of each semeser, but I am happy to share the information with any interested colleagues.

I break the document down into three areas – delivery and feedback, ICT use commentary and room for improvement. A summary of findings gathered from a variety of sources, such as end of Unit evaluation questionnaires, blogs, Wikis, letters, cards, commercial activity comments and e mails are noted as follows:

•           Developing understanding and confidence building.
•           Able to speak in front of peers without fear and nerves.
•           Development of ICT skills.
•           Positive and focused feedback by students and lecturers.
•           Well organised lessons.
•           Learners realise that they are more capable than they thought.
•           Lots of encouragement and reassurances given about their abilities.
•           Skills have been improved – listening, presentation, writing, listening, analysing, evaluating.
•           Students are enjoying presentations more and more and feel involved in the assessment process.
•           Confidence has been gained by learners undertaking the vast array of communication tasks we offer.
•           Skills learned and applied to other Units and/or work.
•           Students are engaging with our Wikis, Blogs and Google Groups more.
•           Students have made quite a lot of comments about not being in rooms with computers.
•           Students are commenting on relevant tasks and seem to like the fact they aren’t being over assessed in our classes.
•           The flexibility of the curriculum has been noted by students learning at different levels of the SCQF framework.
•           Lots of positive feedback about the lecturer’s role in the learning process.
•           Students like using the remote control presenter and are happy with the Flip camera as it is unobtrusive where presentations and meetings can be easily saved on a USB stick.

Working examples

I teach Communication and Oral Presentation Skills to a wonderful group of Access to Languages students. Although this is just one of my classes, the reflective template minus the student names and signatures is used in a number of ways.

1. I give the student bespoke written and verbal feedback on their work.
2. I note the result on their work - remediate or pass (at first sitting).
3. The student looks at my comments and if they understand what they have to do, they continue with the assessment.
4. When the student has passed (and I have annoted their answer paper appropriately) they are asked to make comment on their work in a box titled 'student self-evaluation'. This is an opportunity for the learner to make a comment on such things as how well they thought they performed, what they thought of the assessment, what will they do better in the future etc. What they comment on is up to the student as I don’t want this section to be too regimented but I prefer it not to be blank.
5. When the student agrees with the result they validate the feedback sheet by signing it.

A selection of comments from students this semester are as follows. The summative reading assessment was an article titled ‘Digital books are a threat to writers’.

"When I first read the assessment I found this to be very difficult as English is not my first language. When I read it again and started to look at the questions, I actually thought it was a great resource for me and it turned out to be really appealing. I am glad that I passed as I put a lot of work into the assessment."

"I enjoyed this task more than I expected. Picking apart an article and analysing it was good. The assessment was helpful in terms of writing critically although I think I could have been more succinct in parts."

"I thoroughly enjoyed slowing down enough to really read and absorb a piece of writing and then produce a set of answers which had to be well thought through and relevant."

"This assessment showed me that I need to work on my time management a bit more. During the assessment I ran into a bit of stress because of that but am very happy to have passed. Although we had plenty of time to do it, I know at University there will be stiffer time barriers so I have to improve on that, without losing out on the quality of my responses."

"I am pleased with my overall assessment and evaluation of the article as this is my first assessment in a long time."

"In future I will pay more attention to reading the questions and when it clearly says use your own words, that's what I will do!”

“I think doing the assessment in class over a few sessions was a great way of taking pressure off me. Mind you, I am a Will Self fan so I might be a bit biased!”

“I thought the assessment was testing. We had done some practise reading in previous classes so I knew what was expected. The article itself didn’t really appeal to me and if I was reading a magazine with an article like that, I would probably turn the page over if I’m honest. Despite not liking the content that much, I know I have passed the outcome and that is what I am here to do”.

“I really enjoyed this task. It is a good way to test our skills to analyze and you have to think about lots of things. I will read news articles differently from now on. Thanks”.

Finally, I created a blog for this cohort at the start of session and I regularly update it to go over what we have learned in classes and invite students to make comment. It is one of the ways that helps our learners in particular to become confident individuals, effective contributors and successful learners in line with the Curriculum for Excellence capacities. The students enjoy using it and see it as a supportive aid to their learning, they like the tone of the blog and often comment on this (positively I may add)!
Different contexts:

Feedback is very efficient cross college, of that I am certain and there is no magic answer to how we should deliver it. I will leave the last words to Michael J. Gelb who notes "champions know that success is inevitable; that there is no such thing as failure, only feedback. They know that the best way to forecast the future is to create it.”

Reading allowed. Comments?

Reading to analyse, evaluate and discuss

Dear all,

That was another wonderful session this morning and I enjoyed the buzz of the classroom. I was listening to your conversations and I found them fascinating. The five articles were specifically different: 106 year old virgin, snakes slithering on our streets, salmonella in Tunisia, graveyard yobs and school dinners. All though, from the headlines, was not all that it seemed.

So, we had a sneaky delve into summarising, readership, words, language, photographs, purpose(s) and evaluation. These are the key principles for our first assessment, but that's not for a while.

Next Tuesday we will watch 'The Flyer' and again we will work in groups and feed back to the collective. I feel this is working very well and there (in my opinion, but correct me if I'm mistaken) is a real sense of community within the Access to Languages group.

Very well done to those who submitted their reflective pieces to me yesterday. I really enjoyed reading them and I hope you appreciated my comments / asides, call them what you will.

It's all good as the McCain chips advert told us, and I look forward to seeing you all next week.

Cheers, Mark

Assonance...

Many assonance examples can be found in prose and poetry. Assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds in nearby words. It is used to reinforce the meanings of words or to set the mood. 

 

Assonance Examples

In this example by Carl Sandburg, in Early Moon, the long “O” sounds old or mysterious.

“Poetry is old, ancient, goes back far. It is among the oldest of living things. So old it is that no man knows how and why the first poems came.”

Assonance examples are sometimes hard to find, because they work subconsciously sometimes, and are subtle. The long vowel sounds will slow down the energy and make the mood more somber, while high sounds can increase the energy level of the piece.


“And stepping softly with her air of blooded ruin about the glade in a frail agony of grace she trailed her rags through dust and ashes, circling the dead fire, the charred billets and chalk bones, the little calcined ribcage.”

The words "glade," "frail," "grace," and "trailed" help set the chilling mood of the work, and it is repeated and emphasized at the end with “ribcage.”

Here are a few short assonance examples:
  • “Hear the mellow wedding bells” from Edgar Allen Poe
  • “Try to light the fire”
  • “I lie down by the side of my bride”
  • “Fleet feet sweep by sleeping geese”
  •  Pink Floyd’s “Hear the lark and harken to the barking of the dark fox gone to ground”
  • “It's hot and it's monotonous.” by Sondheim
  • “The crumbling thunder of seas” by Robert Louis Stevenson

Monday, 12 September 2011

Some books that you may wish to buy

Dear all,

The following books (available from Blackwell at the princely sum of one pound) are sure to help you with your studies this year and beyond: 'How to write essays' by Sandra Ashman and Phyllis Creme, 'Taking notes from lectures' by Sandra Ashman and Phyllis Creme, 'Reading for study' by Sandra Ashman and Phyllis Creme, 'Improve your memory' by Ron Fry and 'Citing references' by David Fisher and Terry Harrison. Now, I bought these last year and referred the students to these texts, so hopefully they are still available and they are of assistance to you. All the best, Mark





Reflective writing tasks

Hi all,
Thank you for taking the time to write up your reflective writing pieces on 'all about me' and 'what your bedroom says'. Both exercises are designed to make you think, reflect and just go for it! Lloyd asked a great question, how formal does it have to be? Answer: you decide.

I will read them and give you feedback, but possibly not until next week now. I will be interested in what you have to say and how you write. Spelling will also be commented upon too as a reference point.

As always I welcome your comments, so how did you find the exercise?

Tomorrow we will have a look at analysing and evaluating some short newspaper articles on different subjects and we'll split into five groups I think.

All the best and let's hope there aren't any Mary Poppins incidents after lunch as it is VERY windy out there. My hair will be going all ways...

Mark

Tuesday, 6 September 2011

Vodafone and communication



This is the link to the Vodafone advert that we watched this morning. It is even better with sound!

Cheers,

Mark

Types of communication in words and pictures

Industry in action - the camera never lies

Getting to know each other (ii) and analysing what communication is or can be

Hi all,

I really enjoyed the session this morning and I was impressed with your ability to communicate clearly and effectively using the short questions / group tasks that I set you. We had some cracking definitions too and here is a selection of what the three groups came up with.

Amanda's group - express a coherent idea in order to be understood. The ability between people to receive, express and transmit information. An exchange or supply of information and ideas in order to express an idea.

Guillermo's group - The interaction between individuals. The activity of coneying information.

Lloyd's group - Transfer of information. Processing of information. Non verbal communication such as body language.

Andrew's group - Sharing information through social interaction.

As can be seen, there seemed to be a consensus that communication involved a process where some form of information or meaning is passed between two or more entities.

These general thoughts about communication focused our attention on the communication processes that we will be encountering on the course. I highlighted that at times students will be the producers/senders of information and meaning through writing and presentations. At other times students will be receivers of information and meaning in their encounters as readers and viewers. Of course, generally we will be both producing and receiving information in a single activity (eg. discussions).

Superb stuff and we will continue on Monday with some short writing exercises.

I will post some photos of your types of communication and evidence that you were working effectively in groups this am.

All the best and enjoy the rest of the week,

Mark

Monday, 5 September 2011

First class reflection

Dear all,

So this morning I went over what we will be covering until just after the October holidays on a weekly basis, the two Units you will be studying (Comm IV and OPS), the assessments, a look at your class blog and of course the mini icebreaker that some of you contributed to.

I was impressed (especially for Monday at 9) with your levels of enthusiasm, wide range of backgrounds, hopes for the future etc. and I look forward to part deux tomorrow.

See you then,

Mark

Friday, 2 September 2011

Can't Spell, Won't Spell

Below is a postcard with a poem by W.N. Herbert entitled Can't Spell, Won't Spell (On hearing of the new Scots spellchecker programme, 'Canny Scot')


Thursday, 1 September 2011

Scottish Poetry Library

Dear all,

Thank you to those members of the class who were able to make it along to the SPL today (Thursday 1st September). I think we all enjoyed Lizzie's enthusiasm and the many interesting things on offer within this 'hidden gem.' I have attached a couple of photos for luck and I would highly recommend you check the library out.